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The liquid rushes up my nose, up, up, and all I can think is I cannot breathe, even though I know I have not been able to breathe since…

My eyes flick open; then are stung by the yellow viscous liquid.  I shut them again.  Through the sharp pain stabbing through my eyes and the throbbing, pulsing ache at my neck…

I can feel the glass of the jar press against my ears.  It must be a large jar.  It must be very large indeed, if my entire head can fit within it…

A sudden movement causes my eyes to snap wide again, and this time, despite the wave of agony washed in by that hated liquid, I keep them open.  I am being lifted, or rather, my head is.  I can see my body, lying on the surgical table where they…

The room they carry me into is cool and dark.  I am placed on a desk next to other jars.  I cannot tell what is in them; I do not think I want to know.  I hear voices; they ring and course back, the waves rebounding against the glass of the jar next to my ears.  I cannot make out much of what they are saying, just:  A fine one to add to your collection, eh?  So that is why I am here, I suppose.  I am become a decoration, another oddity in a jar on someone’s desk.
:iconsaffiremoon21:
Part of a creative writing final prompt- to write something 240 words long from the POV of a decapitated head ;D

pleasant, no?
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*drawitbig Sep 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor dear!
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*drawitbig Sep 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah
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~Moonlit917 Jun 6, 2008  Student Writer
Very nice. Creative.
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:iconsaffiremoon21:
it should be, for creative writing XDDDDDDDDDDD
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~Moonlit917 Jun 7, 2008  Student Writer
XD True, very true. lol
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~IIIXandaP Jun 5, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Scary XO .. :+fav: XD
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:iconsaffiremoon21:
yeah, i know XD

thanks for the fave too <3
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~IIIXandaP Jun 5, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome ;P
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:iconsachiko91:
I really like this. Very discriptive and...kinda morbid. :D
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